Jamie
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Forget this life, come with me, don't look back - you're safe now.
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Post by Jamie on Aug 1, 2004 6:26:13 GMT
-grins- He has my name. And my personality, ish. In a different kind of way... Hard to explain lol. But -claps- for the story. I'd love to meet this Carter lol. -J-
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Post by K~Bear on Aug 3, 2004 8:57:48 GMT
Whee!! this rocks! More More More!!!
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Maeva
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What I Know is I Don't Know
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Post by Maeva on Aug 4, 2004 22:35:55 GMT
Oh, this stuff is fabulous! I really like it. But you haven't updated since July 30th. *pointed look* Keep posting!!! I think I like it best from Jamie's point of view, truth be told. Carter's isn't so...confused, you know? And Jamie's way of thinking and that, it is fabulous. Powerful.
Keeping going with it!!
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Post by K~Bear on Aug 5, 2004 3:41:25 GMT
YESH!!! MORE!!!!
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Post by Kasatzia on Aug 7, 2004 12:38:38 GMT
*smiles* I prefer Jamie's point of view too, but it can't always be his, because sometimes you need to find out things about Carter. But it will mostly just be Jamie.
Also, apologies for no updates, but I actually need to WRITE the next chapter. And its very hard when I have writers block.
Anyhoo, much love.
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Anya
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Thanks Jesika for avi and sig!
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Post by Anya on Aug 8, 2004 17:40:55 GMT
That was .... well perfect. Wow, I'm amazed and blown away by this fan fic.... You have to write more, so many people are dying to know what happens next, I being one of them. Wow, I'm on the verge of tears. Why, I'm not sure but I am.
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Lita
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Can you sing with all the voices of the mountain...Can you paint with all the colours of the wind...
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Post by Lita on Aug 8, 2004 21:22:06 GMT
Wow...I just got done reading it all.It's really awesome.Hurry up and post the next chapter...Please. You are a really great author!
**brings out popcorn and soda**
**sits anxiously waiting for next chapter**
This fan fic is VERY addicting...
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Orca
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*is back*
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Post by Orca on Aug 11, 2004 0:53:34 GMT
Jamie!
*waves*
Wow...you're a celebrity? You never told me that...
And yes, you MUST write the next chapter. For I am needing muchly to read it. Bwah.
Okay, I'm done.
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Jamie
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Forget this life, come with me, don't look back - you're safe now.
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Post by Jamie on Aug 11, 2004 22:23:17 GMT
Yes my friend, it appears that my life is being followed. -looks around worriedly- Where are you, Kas? I can hear the camera clicking!
Now... here's my version of ME Jamie and how it would go with Carter.
Jamie: Hey... dude?
Carter: What, J?
Jamie: Well... I was just thinking, y'know, completely randomly, just a wave of thought, it kinda swept over me and made me want to ask something really random, like a wave -
Carter: Uh, Jamie?
Jamie: Right, right sorry.
Carter: That's okay you sexy minx.
Jamie: Huh?
Carter: Nothing, nothing.
Jamie: Okay... anyway. Hum hum hum *is humming*
Carter: Didn't you wanna ask me something?
Jamie: Oh yeah. Have you ever... y'know... fancied a mate?
Carter: Dude, do you not remember Danielle?
Jamie: No, no, not a girl. Like... a guy.
Carter: Uhhh... errrm... what makes you ask that?
Jamie: I was just asking, you know... like you do. At sleepovers. When you're wearing face-packs and getting a pedicure done by your best friend.
Carter: Well that's what we do every time we get together Jamie.
Jamie: I know, I know. So. Have you?
Carter: I dunno really. How can you distinguish a friend from a crush? I guess that maybe you'd be able to tell if that person made a move on you first. They'd slowly slide up to you on the couch, like this *slides* and then brush their hand accidentally against theirs *brushes his hand against Jamies* and then they'd look at each other, like this *they look at each other, Jamie's cheeks blushing underneath the avacado and pineapple face-pack* and then slowly, gently, they'd lean in and press their lips together... Wow, Jamie, that's hard.
Jamie: W-what? I'm not hard - that's my, umm, pencil, I swear!?! Ah s*** -
Carter: I meant the question, J.
Jamie: Oh. Right. So, you know this kiss.
Carter: *nods, tilting his head slightly to the side, his dark eyes looking deep into mine, I mean, Jamies*
Jamie: How would you know if it meant something?
Carter: Well that's obvious.
Jamie: Huh?
Carter: You wouldn't kiss back in the first place if you didn't feel it.
Jamie: Oh.
Carter: You're right, dude, that was a really random question.
Jamie: *quietly* Oh well, you know... sometimes you just gotta ask.
**************************************************************************************** 5 mins later.
Jamie: Oh f*** it, that's it. (FACE-PACK AND PEDICURE ARE WASHED OFF/FINISHED.)
Carter: What?
Jamie: You know what dude, I can't do this anymore, I can't lie to you.
Carter: O...kay.
Jamie: Can I kiss you, Carter?
Carter: Are you drunk, man?
Jamie: No. Slightly high from the nail-polish, but not drunk.
Carter: Oh. So do you really want to kiss me, J?
Jamie: *softly* Yeah, I kinda do.
Carter: Oh. Okay then, I guess we could kiss if you - *leans forward and presses his lips against mine, ah s***, JAMIE'S, softly yet passionately*
Jamie: *CURRENTLY UNABLE TO TALK DUE TO LUST*
Carter: *pulls away breathless* Yeah man, just quickly, I'd better tell you that I'm in love with you and want to shag you senseless.
Jamie: Likewise, so let's not waste any time!
*SCENE FADES TO SOUNDS OF CRASHING ABOUT*
**************************************************************************************** Ah, romance.
Lol, it would be more romantic for me, of course.
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Orca
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*is back*
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Post by Orca on Aug 18, 2004 2:19:02 GMT
LOL, Jamie...I love it...
^.^
*thinks for a moment*
*tackles Jamie*
Mine!
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Jamie
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Forget this life, come with me, don't look back - you're safe now.
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Post by Jamie on Aug 18, 2004 12:20:19 GMT
*looks around wildly*
Was I just tackled? Was that me, or was that the other Jamie dude that happens to have just had THE most romantic thing done to him in the rain.
I'm sorry, but kissing in the rain?
*dies*
Anyway. So back to my original point.
Was I just tackled? *eyes Orca wonderingly*
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Jamie: Hey, Orca dude... did you just tackle me?
Orca: Yeah, I guess I did!
Jamie: Hmmm. Interesting.
Orca: Yeah. I guess so.
Jamie: Hey, Orca?
Orca: Yup?
Jamie: Which out of the two characters do you like best? I mean, out of Jamie or Carter?
Orca: I don't know. I think Jamie, because he's more confused and stuff. You know what I mean?
Jamie: Yeah I do. *hums*
Orca: Umm... J?
Jamie: *stops humming and looks vaguely annoyed as he was about to get to the best bit of Hedwigs Theme* What?
Orca: You're kinda meant to elaborate on that. You know. To carry on this script - I mean, conversation.
Jamie: Oh, right, yeah. Well... I can identify with Jamie more.
Orca: Oh, because of his feelings and everything? Yeah, I remember at the beginning it was really weird, and I had a hard time admitting it, but eventually, one day, I thought -
Jamie: *stares blankly* No, no, dude. I mean because of my name. Jamie... Jamie. Get it?
Orca: *stares back just as blankly* Are you a bit simple?
Jamie: No.
Orca: Oh. *hums Hedwigs Theme*
Jamie: *joins in a the bubbly bit where it sounds like its going into a dream and tries to make it as dreamy*
Orca: *laughs and punches him on the shoulder, still humming*
Jamie: *grins and keeps humming*
RANDOM DUDE WALKS IN.
Random Dude: Hey, you two - do you wanna star in the new Harry Potter Film? Harry Potter and the Dead Battery?
Jamie: Oh my god... I've been spotted. I cannot believe this.
Orca: Yeah! Let's go!
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LATER ON.
RANDOM DUDE IS JOINED BY RANDOM DUDE 2:
Random Dude 2: Now, you, the one with the dark brown hair and dark brown eyes -
Jamie: Me?
Random Dude 2: Look, don't talk, just listen. We've already cast your mate as James Brucklands, the guy that keeps placing the Dead Battery everywhere.
Jamie: Okay... so where does that leave me? As James' gay friend that secretly loves him? Oh I love slash movies.
Random Dude 2: Ummm. No. Not quite. You get to be the Dead Battery.
Jamie: *thinks for a moment*.................... Yeah! Okay! Sounds good to me!
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LATER ON, WHILST FILMING.
Orca/James: Harry Potter won't know what hit him... this Battery will RUIN HIS LIFE! MUAHAHAHA!
Jamie/Battery: Oh James, you're so smart and clever.
DIRECTOR: Cut, CUT. Okay, Jamie... we've been through this. You are NOT gay. You do not fancy him.
Jamie: But how will I ever get noticed as the true Jamie from the story?
DIRECTOR: *looks at him weirdly* What story - oh, never mind. Just... keep quiet and rigid, okay? Your muscles keep relaxing.
Jamie: Right, yeah sorry.
Orca: *looks at Jamie and grins* You're really convincing me here. You're a great battery.
Jamie: *blushes and denies like a shy celebrity*
DIRECTOR: Okay... ACTION, TAKE FIFTY SEVEN!
Orca/James: Harry Potter won't know what hit him... this Battery will RUIN HIS LIFE! MUAHAHAHA!
Jamie/Battery: MUAHAHAHAHAHA! You're so amazing, James, with your great plans. James... I think I'm gay.
DIRECTOR: CUT! For f*** sakes... ****************************************************************************************
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Post by Kasatzia on Aug 18, 2004 23:02:01 GMT
*laughs over and over again*
Jamie, you're going to kill me with your little scripts - and if you do that, I won't be able to post anymore. Which would be a shame...
Because I've written the ELEVENTH CHAPTER! MUAHAHAHA!
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Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Aug 18, 2004 23:03:49 GMT
KASSIE YOU EVIL PERSON! *gasps and falls to the floor* I saw your name and got excited to see you on - and THEN I see that you've posted on Analysis...
Only to disappoint me. Quite frankly, I'm disgusted.
*bows down quickly to worship Kasa-chan before looking at her with awe/disgust again*
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Post by Kasatzia on Aug 19, 2004 0:54:10 GMT
All right, all right. *mutters* I swear, you're all only reading it because you're secretly hoping that your Jamie/Carter'll come along. *tuts*
Don't fall in love with characters of fiction... I'm slowly falling for Jamie!! *smiles* He's so sweet.
Okay, folks. Here goes! Apologies if its crap, I've had severe writers block.
CHAPTER ELEVEN
JAMIES P.O.V
The weekend was a mixture of whirlwind emotions. I felt happy, sad, excited, scared and tingly all at the same time. It’s not like he was my first kiss or anything, but it had been in such a different setting to all my other kisses. In the rain, pressed up against a tree like there was no-one around to see us (I’d already had my panic about that; I decided that if anyone saw us, its not like they could do anything other than tell Clare. Oh dear, breaking up with Clare... shame) and just so damn brilliant.
Oh, yeah, and it was a guy.
My Dad wasn’t in this weekend – it was the best weekend of my life. Mum and I talked about real stuff, as in, how school was, how life in general was, and even about my love life. She seemed very interested in the fact that I wanted to break up with Clare, and tried to get more information out of me – like it would be that easy. I basically told her that I had my eye on someone, and at some point I’d let her meet them. It wasn’t a complete lie – I’d let her meet Carter, of course, but I just wouldn’t tell her that he was my special someone.
“You should have friends over more often, Jamie,” she said to me in her soft voice, reaching out and patting my hand gently. “One day when you’re Dad’s away on business, you can invite someone over. I’d like to see who you make as your friends.”<br> We stayed silent for a moment, each contemplating my friends, before she said suddenly, shockingly,
“You know, I saw you with that Clare girl a few times, and I don’t like the look of her. She looks very... not-your-type.”<br> I looked at her, and her gaze met mine instantly; my stomach leapt two feet into the air, I swear. I wanted to ask her exactly what she meant, but she just smiled at me and stood up, throwing out that she had to do the dishes. Somewhere deep inside of me, I knew that she knew. And that scared me thoroughly. I didn’t know what she’d think – what I did know was that she was brought up in a society where being gay was wrong, and that if anything, she’d try and ignore it the best that she could.
On Monday, just as I was setting off for school in a black t-shirt and black jeans, Mum pulled me over to her. At first I thought she was just hugging me goodbye, but her eyes were drawn instantly to my arms.
Oh my god, I thought, desperately wanting to run from her gaze. She’ll disown me. I can’t believe I forgot to throw a hoody over the top.
She looked at the cuts carefully, running her fingers over them and bringing my arm even closer to her face to look at the scars. As she let me have my arm back, she looked at me before asking,
“Are you unhappy, dear?”<br> My mouth dropped open slightly, before apologies and explanations came tumbling out of my mouth.
“Mum, it was an accident – no, it wasn’t... I just feel so alone sometimes, but I only do it sometimes, I’ll never do it again. I want to make you understand, but it’s so hard... it’s nothing to do with you, I just hate my life sometimes, but I SWEAR it’s nothing to do with you.”<br> She remained quiet, as if to let me have my say completely.
“I love you so much, Mum, but Dad... everyone else... you’re the only one who tries to understand. Apart from Carter.”<br> At the last three words, my heart bounded, and I could feel the blood rush to my cheeks. Mum nodded, looking anywhere but at me, as if she had no idea what to do. I reached out and grabbed her hand, causing her to look at me sharply.
“I’m trying harder not to do it,” I said gently, my eyes filling with tears. As she saw mine sparkle with unshed drops, her own filled quickly, over-spilling. She pulled me towards her, kind and loving as she wrapped her arms around me.
“I don’t want you to do it, Jamie. I love you too much to watch you harm yourself like this – but if this makes you happier, I can’t see much that I can do to help you.”<br> I pulled away, staring at her, gob-smacked.
“B-but Mum... I don’t want to do it. I won’t do it. My... Carter, he’s helping me. He’s trying to, anyway. Really Mum. I’m trying.”<br> I couldn’t understand how she was being so calm about it. If she had been me, I would’ve almost died from shock at this terrible thing that my son was doing, and start blaming it on myself. Maybe that’s what she was doing. Holding it inside.
“Look, I’ve got to go otherwise I’ll be late – but I love you, Mum,” I said, pressing the last bit. “I love you so much. Okay – Dad. When is he getting back from his...” I grimaced, “...business trip?”<br> Mum smiled, suddenly look quite pleased.
“He’s coming back on Wednesday!”<br> I grinned at her, before leaning down and kissing her on the cheek, feeling her cheek-bones rise beneath my lips. I smiled as I turned and walked down the hall to the front door, opening it slowly as the cold wind hit my face. This time, unlike the first time a few days ago, it was refreshing rather than attacking; cool rather than cold. I guess love changes things.
Love? What are you talking about, Jamie? You’ve just met Carter. And you don’t even know if you’re GAY yet!
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Post by Kasatzia on Aug 19, 2004 0:55:49 GMT
I walked down the pavement bouncily with these thoughts, grinning at everyone who walked past me, causing them to smile back. This was pretty cool... maybe it’s true what they say. Smile and the whole world smiles with you.
The bus journey and the walk up to school flew by in quick succession – my brain was entertaining me fully, sometimes a bit too much – images of me and Carter in the changing rooms after Phys. Ed were too frequent for my comfort – although, I’ll admit, I wasn’t particularly complaining about it. On the contrary, it seemed (excuse me whilst I blush) evident that I was enjoying the roll of film that didn’t stop as it whirred from PG to R in rapid movements.
The locker-room was quite full as I got there – I realised that without Dad there, I actually got there on time. A few girls eyed me up as usual, and with the grin I flashed them, I realised that I’d placed them under horrifically false pretences. Oh well. It was their own faults for eye-flirting.
As I opened my locker, however, eye-flirting no longer became an issue. In fact, it transferred into something completely lust-filling and mind-numbingly great. I glanced around as I put my bag in my locker and my eyes caught a pair of beautiful stormy-grey eyes watching me from the other side of the room, not focusing on anything other than me, my body, my face, my eyes. God I just wanted him. Right there.
I blushed again, the blood racing to my cheeks as if in a race to see which cell could get there quickest. Blatantly, the winner decided to set up camp, causing the blush to remain there as he slowly came a little closer. The girl in the locker next to me suddenly squealed,
“Awww, you’re blushing! How cute!”<br> I smiled at her foolishly, agreeing that it was stupid of me to blush, and realising that the only way to get her to stop talking to me was to give her my number. She looked around her smugly as I wrote it on her hand, and as I looked up, I saw him again; he was closer to me now, but there were lockers in-between us. He was looking right at me, a slight smile playing on his lips, as if to say “come and get me”...
Oh trust me, I wanted to.
As the girl walked off and showed the number off to the girl that I had rejected a few days ago, Carter came over to me and said lightly,
“Hey dude, how’s it going?”<br> I stared at him, wondering how the hell he was acting so normal. I opened my mouth to say something about it, when suddenly I felt a hand slide up the back of my t-shirt and onto my back, stroking the skin gently. I yelped slightly, causing him to yank his hand out and looked at me worriedly. Realising he probably thought that I’d changed my mind, I put his mind at rest by muttering under my breath, loading some books into my arms,
“Don’t do that man... what if people realise something?”<br> He smiled lazily, leaning against the lockers as he said,
“They’re all too dumb to notice a simple little thing like me touching you, Jamie... why? Don’t you want me to touch you?”<br> Those words, those few words send shivers up my back, and noticeable ones too. Carter immediately picked up on it, and shifted even closer, not enough so that people suspected, but enough that I could feel the warmth of his body radiating onto mine. I gulped as he whispered into my ear,
“Want me to warm you up, J?”
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