Rayne
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Lycan
...I'm waiting for the sky to fall...
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Post by Rayne on Jul 22, 2005 17:39:01 GMT
Oh, wow.. just wow.
I can't even think of anything else to say, there's nothing good enough to describe this. So I'll just settle with wow.
-glomps Kasatzia- Thank you for finally putting up chapter thirteen!
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Post by Rebekka "Beka" Ebansu on Jul 27, 2005 0:18:11 GMT
OH MY GOD WOMAN, MARRY ME.
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Post by ~<3~Morgan Voltaire~<3~ on Jul 27, 2005 5:02:49 GMT
~blinks~
~faints~
~wakes up quickly to not miss anything~
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Post by Kasatzia on Jul 27, 2005 20:11:16 GMT
*smiles*
I'm so glad you're all enjoying it. In all honesty, that Chapter was hell to write, but at the end of it, it's all worth it; though I start to wonder why I wasn't born a guy...
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loenah
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Gryffindor Student
This will do for now;)
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Post by loenah on Jul 27, 2005 22:02:21 GMT
so deep, so intense, this is what they should b publishing in books these days. not just on websites, but in hard <lol> copy books!!! <no pun intended> that was the first sex scene i read through, and was jus so engrossed! sigh. gr8 u have a gift, dont ever let it die plz!
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bray
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Post by bray on Jul 28, 2005 9:31:39 GMT
OMFG! This is f***ing awesome!! Roll on chapter 14!! *Hugs you!*
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Post by Kasatzia on Jul 28, 2005 19:06:01 GMT
Wow, I get the first post from you? Thanks very much... And as to all of you reviewers, thank-you so much. I can't even begin to say what a buzz I get from knowing people enjoy my rather twisted imagination.
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Post by Rebekka "Beka" Ebansu on Jul 29, 2005 3:36:03 GMT
Forget enjoy - we LOVE your rather twisted imagination! XD
And yes - now that I am feeling more coherent - I will comment slightly more critically. ...Though there's really no criticizm... just... oh, you know what I mean!
First of all - GAHASDKADKSAJD *love*. Thank you. (Wasn't I planning on being coherent?)
Second of all - I LOVE the way you manage to keep Jamie in character, even though he's going through all these changes. To me, most "submissive" guys in guyxguy relationship stories (using manga and fanfiction as my main reference) usually end up seeming OVERLY whiny and hyper and annoying. LUCKILY, this is not even CLOSE to Jamie's case - which is especially good, as it wouldn't suit him at all. Bleh. As opposed to "Oh please, do whatever you want to me, you big strong dominant person you!" (which is annoying as hell), we have Jamie's approach! Which, even though it borders on "do whatever you want to me", faces it from a different angle. His thinking is more along the lines of (correct me if I'm wrong ^^i), "Well, I'm a guy too, I like being 'on top'... but, well, this is sexy, so... yeah, I can deal. This is okay." NO LACK OF MASCULINITY WHATSOEVER! At least, that's what I'm perceiving. Please let me know if I'm processing that wrong. Heh.
AT ANY RATE - I LOVE YOU I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE AND I WILL BE HAPPY AMEN.
Byyyyye!! ^__^
~> Becca
P.S. ...Er. I think I'm high off of little-to-no sleep... sorry for the hyper-ish post. >_>
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Post by Kasatzia on Jul 29, 2005 21:53:53 GMT
*grins* Positively the BEST review I've ever had. Detailed, generous and just brilliant. Thank-you VERY much.
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Post by Rebekka "Beka" Ebansu on Aug 4, 2005 0:57:51 GMT
Much more intelligent than my "MARRY ME" comment, anyway, right? Ha ha! XD
And in turn, that is possibly the best compliment I have ever received. Thank YOU very much! ^___^
Can't wait to read more...! If it continues to be this good, then by all means, take your time. I'll wait patiently. ^^
~> Becca
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Telah
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Gryffindor Student
I died inside the day she said goodbye, now I'm a shell of a man with a spirit of a demon
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Post by Telah on Aug 4, 2005 2:15:23 GMT
Wow you ever thought about sending this to a publisher. I can see it now written in big bold letters on the front page of every news paper in the world Kasatzia the next big childrens auther*sp* seriouly though you have a really great gift and I hope you realize that as much as we all do.
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Post by K~Bear on Aug 12, 2005 7:09:53 GMT
O.O that was awesome! I have been waiting for the next installment for so long and that was it!! -wants more- You are fab Kas! cant wait for more!
And Telah she wouldn't be a children's author if she wrote things like this...it would be more for teenagers to young adults.
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Post by Faerlain on Aug 13, 2005 22:17:02 GMT
Ohhh.....
-is amazed-
^^ Yup, you've got me hooked. Write more... pretty please?
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