Post by Kalista(Retired) on Dec 31, 2005 3:35:22 GMT
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Come take a look, see what you think, any suggestions? Leave them in the appropriate spot, or reply to this thread, either way; all input is loved, as long as it is honest and helpful.
Huggles to you all
~K~
lol, forgot to add a lil taste of what could come...
Lighting bolts the size of giant serpents struck the field of battle. In what took no more than a few measly seconds, their bodies burned and smoked to ashes, some still crawled feebly to their downed neighbor seeking help that could and would not come.
Where once there were hundreds of witches, wizards Knights and other battle worthy humans and non engaging in a final battle of darkness and light, now lay nothing but death and destruction, both good and evil alike, dead from this one single attack.
Kalista stood on the parapet of the dark castle, looking darkly down upon what she had accomplished. All dead or dying, smoldering bodies, some of which she used to call friend. She looked with great indifference, she cared not for them now, all she desired was to see death, to feel their pain and to hear the moaning cries of the dying and to smell the sent of death. She relished this moment, taking in the total chaos the she had delivered.
She let her eyes wonder over to the ones who had somehow managed to escape her wrath. The dark and evil emotions, playing over her beautiful features as she smiled a wicked and knowing smile at these unwanted survivors, began to grow again with a great longing to destroy them all. She felt a hand on her shoulder and looked up to gaze in the eyes of her father.
“Enough, come inside Kalista, its over, let them be, they can not harm you any longer, their time has come and they will have to return to their own land to lick their wounds.” He said, his tone that of the dark Mage he was, for he was not what he seemed, though in Kalista’s mind, it was indeed her father.
A wicked grin spread over the man’s features as he turned one last time to look into the eyes of Kiara Karador, Kalista’s sister, and best friend.
Total control, Kalista didn’t even know who she was, he would see the tree fall, and he would be sure she did it on her very own…
Will it happen, will Kalista's powers be taken over and will she be the one who destroys everything she'd worked so hard to maintain? Lets find out, come and take a part in the world of Karador, choose a side, and most of all, have fun..
Come take a look, see what you think, any suggestions? Leave them in the appropriate spot, or reply to this thread, either way; all input is loved, as long as it is honest and helpful.
Huggles to you all
~K~
lol, forgot to add a lil taste of what could come...
Lighting bolts the size of giant serpents struck the field of battle. In what took no more than a few measly seconds, their bodies burned and smoked to ashes, some still crawled feebly to their downed neighbor seeking help that could and would not come.
Where once there were hundreds of witches, wizards Knights and other battle worthy humans and non engaging in a final battle of darkness and light, now lay nothing but death and destruction, both good and evil alike, dead from this one single attack.
Kalista stood on the parapet of the dark castle, looking darkly down upon what she had accomplished. All dead or dying, smoldering bodies, some of which she used to call friend. She looked with great indifference, she cared not for them now, all she desired was to see death, to feel their pain and to hear the moaning cries of the dying and to smell the sent of death. She relished this moment, taking in the total chaos the she had delivered.
She let her eyes wonder over to the ones who had somehow managed to escape her wrath. The dark and evil emotions, playing over her beautiful features as she smiled a wicked and knowing smile at these unwanted survivors, began to grow again with a great longing to destroy them all. She felt a hand on her shoulder and looked up to gaze in the eyes of her father.
“Enough, come inside Kalista, its over, let them be, they can not harm you any longer, their time has come and they will have to return to their own land to lick their wounds.” He said, his tone that of the dark Mage he was, for he was not what he seemed, though in Kalista’s mind, it was indeed her father.
A wicked grin spread over the man’s features as he turned one last time to look into the eyes of Kiara Karador, Kalista’s sister, and best friend.
Total control, Kalista didn’t even know who she was, he would see the tree fall, and he would be sure she did it on her very own…
Will it happen, will Kalista's powers be taken over and will she be the one who destroys everything she'd worked so hard to maintain? Lets find out, come and take a part in the world of Karador, choose a side, and most of all, have fun..
