Dante Rose Black
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Slytherin Student
Goodnight love I'll see you when my eyes open
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Post by Dante Rose Black on Dec 17, 2005 19:21:44 GMT
I wrote this after I had a fight with one of my ex's and I felt like cutting yeah I know I'm stupid....but i have a long history of mental instability. WARNING COULD UPSET SOME!!! It always hurts at first as it tears, the ripping sound like music to my ears stare as the blood drops form like tears red, red tears more and more slashing in every open spot and then you stop stare in disbelief as you regain your senses. Blood covering and burning always burning Never stops never ends the burning like fire like poison thorns of Hell's desire The burning and now the tears The blood and now your fears Cover cover hold them tight, keep away from prying eyes. Fake a smile hide a sigh, living you daily lie. Then at night take up your knife and cut away the days strifes. Smile smile as blood tears form Blood tears running down your arm, as you prepare for the burning the sighs and now your learning smell the blood, smell the fears taste the collection of bitter tears... running faster faster, the knifes your master Can't get away wanna get away Searching searching always searching for a way to ease the burning, your knife was forged in Hell's fire. The desire more than you can bear. So take up your mask, write out your lies. Hide your face from prying eyes. Smile some more they'll never know. Your arms cry blood tears as your heart burns.
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Post by Teagan on Dec 17, 2005 20:06:31 GMT
That's really good. It's like the poem's words are reaching out at you like hands and trying to pull you into them. You can really feel the emotion, and it's a great way to express troublesome thoughts to allow someone else to feel them. Usually, things are so complex there are some difficulties with that. Amazing, really. Cutting yourself is bad, but at least you realize that.
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Crimson
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...Les Mis?rables...
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Post by Crimson on Dec 24, 2005 0:37:23 GMT
Ahahahahahawhaha ^_________________________________________^ So emo.
omfgaufae, let me write you a letter from the fountain of my wrists. It sounds just like your face.
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Post by Faerlain on Dec 24, 2005 19:50:33 GMT
It's a nice poem, just not really my type. A bit too dark for my tastes.
And you should probably put some kind of trig warning on it- I know there are other people around here with similar problems, and suddenly stumbling upon this might upset them.
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