Amari
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.x. Your Subtleties; They Strangle Me .x.
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Post by Amari on Dec 23, 2005 23:05:35 GMT
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Post by Teagan on Dec 23, 2005 23:18:20 GMT
lol. Niiiiice. I see you were being very creative.^^ Unfortunately, critism is one thing I'm good at, though, so let's see......
Mistress Bake:
-Even though her dress is of that style, some wrinkles should be caused by its sway near the waist where it's not moving like that.
-Her right arm seems a bit thinner than the rest of her frame.
-I think her left wrist is too slender looking.
Enamela:
-I know it's three-quarters perspective for her face, but you need to make the left eye fit that position; it looks flat.
-The fingers on her right hand don't look realistic; they're joined at the second knuckle from the palm.
-Though the skirt's motion is good, it doesn't look like there's a reason for it to move that way.
It also doesn't look like there's a lot of motion in either of your pictures...
By the way, would this contest happen to be on AA?
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Amari
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.x. Your Subtleties; They Strangle Me .x.
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Post by Amari on Dec 23, 2005 23:23:12 GMT
Correct. It's on AA.
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Post by Teagan on Dec 23, 2005 23:25:37 GMT
I thought it might be. Your characters are very good, though. I hope you win.
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Dylan
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Post by Dylan on Dec 24, 2005 0:38:36 GMT
Sorry, I shouldn't spam and such. Nice work, Amari.
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Amari
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.x. Your Subtleties; They Strangle Me .x.
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Post by Amari on Dec 24, 2005 18:51:03 GMT
Thank you both for your input. It means alot.
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Post by Faerlain on Dec 24, 2005 19:44:59 GMT
Aw, they're both very cute. I hope you win. ^^
Edit- I would offer some critique, but... well, the only thing I can draw is stick figures. ;D
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Telah
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Post by Telah on Dec 28, 2005 18:10:08 GMT
There awsome, what program if any did you use to in them and where can I get it?
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Sin
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Post by Sin on Dec 30, 2005 23:07:40 GMT
They're both very lovely ^_^ Mistress Bake is my favorite though
...*has a strange urge to steal*
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