Blood Tears...

[Dante Rose Black]

I wrote this after I had a fight with one of my ex's and I felt like cutting yeah I know I'm stupid....but i have a long history of mental instability.

WARNING COULD UPSET SOME!!!

It always hurts at first as it tears,
the ripping sound like music to my ears
stare as the blood drops form
like tears red, red tears
more and more slashing
in every open spot
and then you stop
stare in disbelief as you
regain your senses. Blood covering
and burning always burning
Never stops never ends
the burning like fire like poison
thorns of Hell's desire
The burning and now the tears
The blood and now your fears
Cover cover hold them tight, keep
away from prying eyes. Fake a smile
hide a sigh, living you daily lie.
Then at night take up your knife and
cut away the days strifes.
Smile smile as blood tears form
Blood tears running down your arm,
as you prepare for the burning the sighs
and now your learning
smell the blood, smell the fears
taste the collection of bitter tears...
running faster faster, the knifes your master
Can't get away wanna get away
Searching searching always searching
for a way to ease the burning, your knife
was forged in Hell's fire.
The desire more than you can bear.
So take up your mask, write out your lies.
Hide your face from prying eyes.
Smile some more they'll never know.
Your arms cry blood tears as your heart burns.

[Teagan]

That's really good. It's like the poem's words are reaching out at you like hands and trying to pull you into them. You can really feel the emotion, and it's a great way to express troublesome thoughts to allow someone else to feel them. Usually, things are so complex there are some difficulties with that. Amazing, really.

Cutting yourself is bad, but at least you realize that.

[Crimson]

Ahahahahahawhaha
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So emo.

omfgaufae, let me write you a letter from the fountain of my wrists. It sounds just like your face.

[Faerlain]

It's a nice poem, just not really my type. A bit too dark for my tastes.

And you should probably put some kind of trig warning on it- I know there are other people around here with similar problems, and suddenly stumbling upon this might upset them.