Makira Blackthorne
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Gryffindor Student
~Xx.Loving You Makes Me Happy Everyday.xX~
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Post by Makira Blackthorne on Oct 11, 2005 6:18:56 GMT
/Tears/Sadness/Pain/Inside /Mad dash to the finish line/ /Don't leave yet/ /Don't go/ /I need you here/ /You help my feelings flow/ /I cringe at the sight/ /Of you Dying/ /Please/ /Please don't go tonight/ /Not yet/ /For me/ /For us/ /For you/ /Don't make a fuss/ /We know you're hurting/ /We're hurting, too/ /We need someone/ /That someone is you/ /Mom's Knight in Armour/ /Brother's Big Hero/ /And my/ /Amigo/ /Secert-Keeper/ /Candy-Giver/ /Mr. Handy/ /Always Happy-go-lucky; just dandy/ /My Best Pal and Comrade/
/My Dad/
~/Dad's Lil' Girl Sends Her Love To You In Heaven/~
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Post by Hikalyn Sarello on Oct 11, 2005 6:28:49 GMT
Again, very nice job. And I think it would work well, though I might add a few more words to it.. (not to the poem, I mean to a eulogy). I'd probably use it to close it, though. If you know what I mean.
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Post by .Lori. on Oct 11, 2005 6:33:01 GMT
*nods* I know. Thanks, Lyn. *smiles weakly*
*wipes cheeks*
~.Maki
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Post by Teagan on Oct 14, 2005 19:31:41 GMT
Sad, Maki.
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Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Oct 19, 2005 8:48:18 GMT
Sad, yes, but also beautiful.
My love, xx
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Arsenic
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"I am hollow and I will live forever.."
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Post by Arsenic on Oct 19, 2005 9:05:18 GMT
*hugs yet again* as i said in MSN it is very good Lori
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Post by .Lori. on Oct 19, 2005 16:34:11 GMT
Thank you, you guys. Means a lot; it does. I appreciate you commenting. *weak smile*
*hugs*
~*.Love, L o r i ♥
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