Post by Telah on Oct 3, 2005 2:54:01 GMT
Ok everyone this is my first attempt at writing a song. It is going to some what like the song
If I Could Be Like That by Three Doors Down when I get the guitar and vocals in. So if you've ever heard that song you will probibly get a better Idea of what the finised product will sound like. Anyway heres the lyrics, tell me what you think.
But You Fell In love
You’ve went your whole life without a mention
Living on your good intentions
But in this world it’s not what you’ve done
It’s who you are
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
You met him back in high school
You looked at her and said she’s cool
You walked off hand it hand
Like you had your whole life planned
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
Now you’re looking in her eyes
You smile as you stand by his side
He puts the ring on your finger
You smile and say I do
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
Your daughter walks in one day after school
She asks you mom why can’t we have money
Dad why can’t your job be cool
You just look at her and smile
And drift off for a while
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
I could have been famous
My name lit up on Broadway
She could have been a dancer
Her life moving a whole lot faster
We could have spent our whole lives, living alone
But we fell in love
But we fell in love
Please tell me what you think and give me any sujestions if you have any ok.
If I Could Be Like That by Three Doors Down when I get the guitar and vocals in. So if you've ever heard that song you will probibly get a better Idea of what the finised product will sound like. Anyway heres the lyrics, tell me what you think.
But You Fell In love
You’ve went your whole life without a mention
Living on your good intentions
But in this world it’s not what you’ve done
It’s who you are
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
You met him back in high school
You looked at her and said she’s cool
You walked off hand it hand
Like you had your whole life planned
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
Now you’re looking in her eyes
You smile as you stand by his side
He puts the ring on your finger
You smile and say I do
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
Your daughter walks in one day after school
She asks you mom why can’t we have money
Dad why can’t your job be cool
You just look at her and smile
And drift off for a while
Chorus
You could have been famous
Your name lit up on Broadway
You could have been a dancer
Your life moving a whole lot faster
You could have had money
You could have had fame
But you fell in love
But you fell in love
I could have been famous
My name lit up on Broadway
She could have been a dancer
Her life moving a whole lot faster
We could have spent our whole lives, living alone
But we fell in love
But we fell in love
Please tell me what you think and give me any sujestions if you have any ok.