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Hope Daniels
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~Black Dove~ Sept 19, 2005 22:38:45 GMT

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Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 19, 2005 22:38:45 GMT

Disclaimer: Um, yeah, Mai... If you want to sue me, feel free to... At least I'll get it done happily... Yeah, so a big apology to Mai, but a humongous thanks to her.

So, I was sitting on my bed, thinking on how I really wanted to write a poem.. A really good one, one that I'd actually enjoy, and be proud to make it... Sure, there have been a few... Princess and White Rose (Yes bow to my linkage.) But yeah, I'm starting to really like this one. --Back to the point-- So, then I thought of Mai, and how amazing her poems were, the fact that she got one published . . . Then, BAM... I thought of her Personalized Text "Black Dove" BAM all these words just swarmed into my brain, and I had to write it...

So, I'm sorry again for... Using your personalized text for my poem title, Mai... -Hugs-

Um, so, what do ya'll think?

Black Dove

The gleam in your eye, hardly deceiving
Speak no words, though have meaning
Feathery wings sprouted from your back
A reminder of how you’ve sinned, ebony, black

Crimson eyes lift from the ground
Pierce the soul, but don’t make a sound
Curse us with love, bless us with hate
Deny the emotion you desire to make

Lies can break you
The truth can’t save you
So where does that leave you, dove?
A blackened soul, a blackened heart, and no room for love

Now furious you want to holler, scream, shout
Express denied feelings until raw in the throat
Tell them you crave the forbidden
Let them no you want it, let your wish be given

But, shh, Black Dove
Remember
Ebony wings can’t grant love
Forever

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Carmen, thank you, it means so much. xx'xx

~<3~Morgan Voltaire~<3~ New Member Gryffindor Student I tell myself he's nothing. I lie a lot. Posts: 2,913	~Black Dove~ Sept 19, 2005 22:43:40 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ~<3~Morgan Voltaire~<3~ on Sept 19, 2005 22:43:40 GMT Oh wow. And I mean.....wow. Thats beautiful. Jeez Hope...Thats really pretty.
	You're beautiful. You're beautiful. You're beautiful, it's true. But it's time to face the truth, I will never be with you.

Hope Daniels New Member Slytherin Student .rainbow in disguise. Posts: 1,005	~Black Dove~ Sept 19, 2005 23:02:45 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 19, 2005 23:02:45 GMT ;D -Glompage- Thank you a bunch. Means lots. ^.^
	Last Edit: Sept 19, 2005 23:03:32 GMT by Hope Daniels Carmen, thank you, it means so much. xx'xx

Carissa New Member Ravenclaw Student :Forever/Love: Posts: 184	~Black Dove~ Sept 19, 2005 23:46:26 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Carissa on Sept 19, 2005 23:46:26 GMT HOLY SHYTE!!!!!!!!! O.O Cuzzy, that's... Amazing... I totally love it!!!! Ohmygod!!! Wow... -Worships-

Hope Daniels New Member Slytherin Student .rainbow in disguise. Posts: 1,005	~Black Dove~ Sept 20, 2005 0:03:58 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 20, 2005 0:03:58 GMT -Wide grin- -Huggles teh Carissa- Thankee a bunch! -Is all motivated to write now-
	Carmen, thank you, it means so much. xx'xx

Brent(back, thank the Goddess) New Member Slytherin Student Who says guys can't wear pink..? Posts: 108	~Black Dove~ Sept 21, 2005 15:25:29 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Brent(back, thank the Goddess) on Sept 21, 2005 15:25:29 GMT Whoa.. That was fcking great! Good job! glomps The Hope-Master*
	--Lazy Bum #4-- [/b] -Worship the Hope Master-[/center]

Hope Daniels New Member Slytherin Student .rainbow in disguise. Posts: 1,005	~Black Dove~ Sept 21, 2005 19:44:57 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 21, 2005 19:44:57 GMT Aw, thanks. ^.^ -Glomps back- Heh, now I'm the Hope-Master? WooT.
	Carmen, thank you, it means so much. xx'xx

Maí Lé Rosà New Member Demon Torn wings. Posts: 921	~Black Dove~ Oct 20, 2005 12:46:27 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Oct 20, 2005 12:46:27 GMT Hmm. Interesting. I haven't been around for a bit, so I didn't see this until now. And no worries about the title. It's the words that catch me. You write like I do. Beautifully. ~Mai xx
	Paralyze · Hypnotize · Terrorize your body · your senses · your mind Maí Lé Rosà Hell's Princess xx

Ondrea New Member Faerie (Slytherin) Posts: 720	~Black Dove~ Oct 20, 2005 22:33:42 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Ondrea on Oct 20, 2005 22:33:42 GMT Oh God, wow. That is so good... you talented lil Hope! bows to Hope Amazing.

Teagan Prefect Ravenclaw Student Hm..... Families aren't nice. Posts: 1,920	~Black Dove~ Oct 20, 2005 23:07:35 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Teagan on Oct 20, 2005 23:07:35 GMT Wow. That really reminds me of Maí Lé Rosà.
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~Black Dove~ Oct 30, 2005 3:55:48 GMT

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Post by Hope Daniels on Oct 30, 2005 3:55:48 GMT

mai said:

Hmm. Interesting.

I haven't been around for a bit, so I didn't see this until now. And no worries about the title. It's the words that catch me.

You write like I do.
Beautifully.

~Mai xx

I'm glad that you don't mind, I was sort of worried. Wow, that meant a lot Mai, so much, coming from you... thank you. If I write anything like you, it's from reading your amazing poems, posts.

ondrea said:

Oh God, wow. That is so good... you talented lil Hope! *bows to Hope* Amazing.

Heh, thanks a bunch. ^.^ -Hugs-

teagan said:

Wow. That really reminds me of Maí Lé Rosà.

Wow, thanks. ^_^.

I guess I did a pretty good job on this one... o.O

Carmen, thank you, it means so much. xx'xx

Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 19, 2005 22:38:45 GMT

Post by ~<3~Morgan Voltaire~<3~ on Sept 19, 2005 22:43:40 GMT

Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 19, 2005 23:02:45 GMT

Post by Carissa on Sept 19, 2005 23:46:26 GMT

Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 20, 2005 0:03:58 GMT

Post by Brent(back, thank the Goddess) on Sept 21, 2005 15:25:29 GMT

Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 21, 2005 19:44:57 GMT

Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Oct 20, 2005 12:46:27 GMT

Post by Ondrea on Oct 20, 2005 22:33:42 GMT

Post by Teagan on Oct 20, 2005 23:07:35 GMT

Post by Hope Daniels on Oct 30, 2005 3:55:48 GMT