Hope Daniels
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Slytherin Student
.rainbow in disguise.
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Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 19, 2005 22:34:37 GMT
Humm, I wrote a poem... Feedback.......? Red rose A bloodied mess White rose I must confess
I tainted your beauty With my crimson flaws You color me pretty While I stained your petals
You soak up my sorrow Grieving in blood as I We both lay tinged with guilt For you enjoy your sins, as I enjoy mine
I seek pleasure from the scars You love being scarlet with pain The marks blemish down my arms The new color makes you feel alive
We’re both dirty Filth in this world We’re mistreated A rose, and a girl
Red rose I must confess I turned you black With dark secrets
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Dante Rose Black
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Goodnight love I'll see you when my eyes open
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Post by Dante Rose Black on Oct 12, 2005 3:58:47 GMT
HMMM seeing as I LOVE roses and thats very pretty 10/10
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Ondrea
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Faerie (Slytherin)
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Post by Ondrea on Oct 12, 2005 21:12:48 GMT
Woo Hoo~ That is awesome, good job Hope!!! *reads over* hehe I love it!
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Post by Teagan on Oct 22, 2005 19:41:38 GMT
Short, sweet, and good. ^^
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Hope Daniels
New Member
Slytherin Student
.rainbow in disguise.
Posts: 1,005
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Post by Hope Daniels on Oct 30, 2005 2:46:01 GMT
Erm...Thanks...For...Rating...It...? o.O' Well, I'm glad you gave me 10/10.... ^.~
Aww, thanks Ondrea.
Thankyou Teagan. ^.^
Sorry I didn't reply to the comments. -Hugs- ^.^
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Post by Teagan on Oct 30, 2005 2:47:22 GMT
...Sorry I didn't reply to the comments. -Hugs- ^.^ lol. No worries.^^ This board is usually pretty inactive, anyway.
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