In Love (Poem)

Z
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In Love (Poem) Jul 31, 2005 1:15:59 GMT

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Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 1:15:59 GMT

The world may stop but i'm still next to you
Time may start but i'm still stuck to you
So when both out lives end
I'll still be right beside you

If you only live for a hundred days
I'll live for one day less
So then I can have you all my life
and always have the best

When you pass you give a smile
and I always smile back
So when tthey say the best things in life are free
I finnaly know what they mean

Last Edit: Jul 31, 2005 1:16:40 GMT by Z

Keelin Thomas New Member Ravenclaw Student Love can suck, but when you're honest, it's a wonderful thing Posts: 908	In Love (Poem) Jul 31, 2005 1:23:40 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Keelin Thomas on Jul 31, 2005 1:23:40 GMT Very good! I really like that, kinda reminds me of something i would say,^^

Z New Member Slytherin Student ~/Alone\~ Posts: 320	In Love (Poem) Jul 31, 2005 3:34:42 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 3:34:42 GMT Any other Comments?

† Cealla † New Member Lycan - Running Wild - Posts: 247	In Love (Poem) Jul 31, 2005 3:41:32 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by † Cealla † on Jul 31, 2005 3:41:32 GMT Very nice. But they kind of seem like three separate poems, since each verse can be read and understood on it's own. But I like it. It's cute.

Z New Member Slytherin Student ~/Alone\~ Posts: 320	In Love (Poem) Jul 31, 2005 3:42:46 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 3:42:46 GMT Thanks Cealla

Z New Member Slytherin Student ~/Alone\~ Posts: 320	In Love (Poem) Jul 31, 2005 16:29:08 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 16:29:08 GMT ~Bump~

Amari New Member Vampire .x. Your Subtleties; They Strangle Me .x. Posts: 84	In Love (Poem) Aug 1, 2005 1:43:45 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Amari on Aug 1, 2005 1:43:45 GMT Beautiful, and uplifting. ^.~
	.x. with love .x.

Dante Rose Black New Member Slytherin Student Goodnight love I'll see you when my eyes open Posts: 645	In Love (Poem) Nov 23, 2005 17:47:28 GMT Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dante Rose Black on Nov 23, 2005 17:47:28 GMT wow stares in awe
	I'm starting over again. This isn't good or bad. It's just the way of things. Nothing stays the same.

Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 1:15:59 GMT

Post by Keelin Thomas on Jul 31, 2005 1:23:40 GMT

Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 3:34:42 GMT

Post by † Cealla † on Jul 31, 2005 3:41:32 GMT

Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 3:42:46 GMT

Post by Z on Jul 31, 2005 16:29:08 GMT

Post by Amari on Aug 1, 2005 1:43:45 GMT

Post by Dante Rose Black on Nov 23, 2005 17:47:28 GMT