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Post by Katrina Knight (Break) on Jul 20, 2005 1:51:08 GMT
(-Hugs Shakira-) Like the icons I made for the poems!? ...Hee... Such a pretty knife, princess Watch the blade gleam Such a pretty knife, princess You’re lifting it so keen Such a pretty knife, princess You can’t look away Such a pretty knife, princess Such a role it will play
What crimson blood, princess Watch the cut split What crimson blood, princess Could it get better then this? What crimson blood, princess Falling to the floor What crimson blood, princess Craving for more
Are you getting dizzy, princess? Cutting vertical Are you getting dizzy, princess? Sensations wonderful Are you getting dizzy, princess? Blood loss isn’t bad Are you getting dizzy, princess? Dying isn’t sad
Hush, princess You fall to the floor Hush, princess No one’s opening the door Hush, princess Let your screams subside Hush, princess Let unconsciousness close your eyes
There, there, princess It’ll only hurt for a while There, there, princess The burning only mild There, there, princess It’s almost over There, there, princess You’re free from life forever
Come now, princess Take death’s icy hand Come now, princess Find peace again
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Professor Merry Divine
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Merry's idea of firm discipline: 'Did you really?' said Mr. Weasley eagerly. 'Did it go all right?'
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Post by Professor Merry Divine on Jul 20, 2005 22:23:10 GMT
That is very sad . . . and a bit gross. But it is good to exspress yourself in words. If you did that in life -er- I'd suggest you find some help.
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Hope Daniels
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Post by Hope Daniels on Jul 25, 2005 16:57:38 GMT
Nope, I don't, trust me, I am such a happy person... Gods... Tis scary.
Most poems I write have nothing to do with the way I feel... o0.
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Sin
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Post by Sin on Jul 25, 2005 22:01:25 GMT
o.0....omg, that's such an awesome poem Kat. It's really in depth
lol...My english teacher would absolutely love you
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Professor Merry Divine
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Merry's idea of firm discipline: 'Did you really?' said Mr. Weasley eagerly. 'Did it go all right?'
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Post by Professor Merry Divine on Jul 25, 2005 22:46:02 GMT
Well, good then.
In that case I will agree with Miss Sin that they are very in-depth and thought provoking.
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Post by Katrina Knight (Break) on Jul 26, 2005 15:32:43 GMT
Lol, thanks a bunch. ^_^
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Jade Starr
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Post by Jade Starr on Sept 20, 2005 1:14:50 GMT
Now that you linked it, and I DID read it, just never commented on it. -berates self-
But I think it's great. Tisn't gross. -shakes head-
Dark and inspiring. -nods-
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Carissa
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Post by Carissa on Sept 20, 2005 11:45:32 GMT
Teh Jade-y-Jade has posted -glomps- ^,^
.... I can't believe I never posted here O.O I must have told you what I thought on MSN or something >.0
Anyhow, I luuuuuuurves it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111!!!ExclamationpointExclamationpointoneone
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Hope Daniels
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Post by Hope Daniels on Sept 24, 2005 0:23:02 GMT
Aw, thanks a bunch Jade! -Hugs-
Lol, you told me over IM. ^.^
And thanks a whole lot! -Glomple-
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