Elorra
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Post by Elorra on Sept 16, 2005 10:50:06 GMT
~*~A blade of grass.~*~ ~*~A whispering wind~*~ ~*~A lovers cry~*~ ~*~A mortal sin~*~ ~*~A cherished life~*~ ~*~A loved one gone~*~ ~*~The dance of life~*~ ~*~Forever on~*~ ~*~These are our memories~*~ I came up with this *points* not to long ago, about 15mins or so ago while talking to our beloved Miss Hayzie Bob. Tell me what you think.
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Post by Chris on Sept 16, 2005 17:52:13 GMT
<3 ;D
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Post by Elorra on Sept 17, 2005 1:58:13 GMT
Thanks love
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Post by Hikalyn Sarello on Sept 17, 2005 7:03:27 GMT
Ooh, really well done. Really concise, well constructed, nice imagery, is what I think.
...I also think this thread is probably better off in the fanfic section, even though it's not really a fanfic, so I'm moving it. XDD Don't eat me!
Oy, shouldn't the last line be "These are our memories"?
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Elorra
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Post by Elorra on Sept 17, 2005 14:42:30 GMT
Ah! so i didn't fix it up. I ment to.
Well do that now
*trots off to edit it*
Oh and danka Kalyn
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Post by amy on Sept 17, 2005 17:37:56 GMT
Pretty, 'Lorra. ^^
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Post by Elorra on Sept 18, 2005 8:07:26 GMT
danka Miss Amy
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Post by K~Bear on Sept 19, 2005 8:14:57 GMT
Ooo I likes ^^
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