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Mai/Me
Jun 6, 2005 3:04:58 GMT
Post by Teagan on Jun 6, 2005 3:04:58 GMT
Mai: No longer Hell's princess. Now, melancholy beauty. lol.
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Mai/Me
Jun 6, 2005 3:12:56 GMT
Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Jun 6, 2005 3:12:56 GMT
Hehe, I am what I am. Here's something random I just figured I'd make up on the spot so this post wouldn't be completely pointless. -rolls eyes- I suppose nobody knows why the world all turned grey Colour after colour, each faded away I remember a rainbow, its colours so bright Now everything's gone, except for tonight Who ever thought your touch could sleep on my mind? I suppose nobody knows that now...
I'm blind.
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Mai/Me
Jun 6, 2005 3:24:05 GMT
Post by Teagan on Jun 6, 2005 3:24:05 GMT
§Mai, that sounds so familiar, it's freaky. You are really good with these.
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Mai/Me
Jun 6, 2005 3:24:56 GMT
Post by Professor Windwaltz on Jun 6, 2005 3:24:56 GMT
Buy it? Publishing and what not just isn't the same anymore now that we have this here fancy INTERNET. People can just download files and music and stuff illegally! It's not worth it!
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Mai/Me
Jun 6, 2005 6:38:42 GMT
Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Jun 6, 2005 6:38:42 GMT
-stares at little pathetic poem thing- Hmm...Teagan you're right...That is familiar, gods, I hope I haven't plagerised something. -biggest fear in the world- Something about the grey part... -racks memory for any kind of similar source- Feh, I'll be here forever with a memory like mine, but hey, hopefully it's all mine, as far as I know it is...? And yeah, Talon's right...Though I would love to be able to say I published something one day... -sighs dreamily-
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Mai/Me
Jun 6, 2005 18:52:10 GMT
Post by Teagan on Jun 6, 2005 18:52:10 GMT
I'm sure you can. You're an amazing writer, Mai. I'm not poetic, and even I don't tire of reading yours.
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Jesslin
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Faerie
What we do in life, echos in eternity
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Mai/Me
Jun 7, 2005 3:16:06 GMT
Post by Jesslin on Jun 7, 2005 3:16:06 GMT
Now your boasting no i really love them, i actually perfer the clay soldiers but they're all so purdiful, the words know their way!
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Dovie(comp down indefinitely)
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Our greatest glory is not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall.
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Mai/Me
Jun 10, 2005 13:51:37 GMT
Post by Dovie(comp down indefinitely) on Jun 10, 2005 13:51:37 GMT
Dittos, I love your poetry, Mai. Your style is so unique, and the wordsmithing is impeccable. You're inspiring!
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Mai/Me
Jun 13, 2005 14:56:22 GMT
Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Jun 13, 2005 14:56:22 GMT
~ What would it mean to wish upon a star? Would you tell me where you came from? Would you tell me who your are?
What would it mean to call upon the moon? Would you stay a little longer? Would you leave me now so soon?
I can see you sitting there atop my windowsill, I wonder when I left the world, gulped down another pill. Say, could you tell me, pretty fairy by the glass, How long will it take to fade, how long 'till it will pass? My room is singing vertigo, I'm feeling kinda sick, I think I fell and hit my head, my skull is feeling thick. Why the hell are you so small, and why wont you shut up? Why the hell is my mirror dancing and why am I so fu-"hiccup!"
My dear sweet girl you're the one dancing, You've spent the past half hour romancing, About me here on your windowsill, About nursery rhymes, about Jack and Jill. You silly teen you're holding a joint, What are your trying to prove? What's your point? Your once pretty eyes now swirl with confusion, And look at me now, you've made an illusion. I know your hurting, don't relapse on drugs, For all you'll create is more of us-
BUGS! That's what you are, you deceptive fay, Piss off right now, piss off and be gay. I'm trapped in a corner, a world full of hate, What the hell's going on, my head feels faint. Oh s***, here it comes, 'scuse the mess on the floor, God damn, watch my fingers, I'm searching for more. What the hell have I done, the fay's bathed in mud, Hold up now, my visions back, holy s***, that's blood...
Dear dear it is over, next time wont come, Ask yourself again fool, what on earth have you done?
No fairy, don't go! I can't feel my own heart, Please give me your wings, please don't depart. Oh god my own gut, it's wreched with pain, Oh god, little fay, come back, again...
You lost your own dignity and now you're alone, Dissolve in your shame, blood to blood, bone to bone.
God help me, I'm dying, where's mercy or fate, What the hell's happening, the hangover's late. Oh s***, I'm a goner, this time it's serious, What the hell have I done, no more, I'm delirious...
An overdose in adrenaline, I'm paralyzed in ecstasy, But wait...Before I die, where's that illusion, that fairy?
So cold in the snow, I'll fade away, You killed your spirit too, forever night, no more day, My wings are failing, and my limbs have snapped, I'll say goodbye now mortal body, I'll be your soul here, Unwrapped.
No, wait, gentle fairy, are you a tear? A tear I cry? Oh please gentle fairy, spare me a kiss, before we die? ...
What would it mean to wish upon a star? Would you tell me where you came from? Would you tell me who your are?
What would it mean to call upon the moon? Would you stay a little longer? Would you leave me now so soon? ~
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Mai/Me
Jun 13, 2005 15:02:03 GMT
Post by Hayzie on Jun 13, 2005 15:02:03 GMT
...all I have to say is wow. I commented on the rest through MSN to you, but... I mean... wow.
I think the latest one is one which has to be read and reread to be fully understood. I read it out loud, and can imagine seeing the situation unfold before me.
Mai -- you really are talented. I wish I could write like that, hun -hugs-
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Fáylinn
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I'm back, and ready to leave stars on your wrist
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Mai/Me
Jun 15, 2005 14:23:09 GMT
Post by Fáylinn on Jun 15, 2005 14:23:09 GMT
Wow, they're all just so amazing, you inspire me so much... O.O
I really love the one you just posted, it's... Amazing.
You are extremely talented with words, I almost felt myself getting into that position.
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Mai/Me
Jul 14, 2005 16:11:13 GMT
Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Jul 14, 2005 16:11:13 GMT
Miscarriage
Define the word Define the meaning Ask me again why I'm still breathing...
Shake my body Break my heart How could such a small thing tear one apart?
Sitting on winter shivering, Thinking of death delivering, Body slowly quivering.
Hollow hope of your generation, Blood gushing in desperation, A pained nation.
Sharp you came Sharp you go Crystalline tears of crimson flow.
Hold me baby, Let me feel, Count my wounds, Help me heal what's real...
I'll wait for you, it wont be long, Hush little baby, hear my song...
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"An intimate moment brought baby to me Sleep my little darling, in time you'll see A petal of a rose can fall from it's tower But another shall take it's place in Spring's next shower
You were my petal; I was your tower You fell from me; Death was your shower...
Come back to me baby I feel so small Please catch me baby I fear I'm gonna fall Why can't I hold you baby? Give you a kiss? How can our lives just end like this?
I wanted to hold your tiny body in my arms... I wanted to hear you cry... Why did daddy Death take you as his own... Ignoring the screaming of a mother left alone, Why baby? Why did my baby die?
I can see your reflection in the blood I've shed, I understand now that you're finally dead, I just don't understand why you went, After all this gentle love I've spent..."
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Please baby, teach me, for I too wish to die, Show me how to spread my wings, Show me how to fly... Even though you're gone now, with the angels up high, I'm living for you baby, can you hear my cry? I know that you're gone, and I can't come too, But just remember baby,
Mommy loves you...
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Mai/Me
Jul 18, 2005 22:23:24 GMT
Post by Teagan on Jul 18, 2005 22:23:24 GMT
...Sad. *has run out of things to say about Mai's wonderful work*
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Mai/Me
Oct 20, 2005 13:22:33 GMT
Post by Maí Lé Rosà on Oct 20, 2005 13:22:33 GMT
The lack of comments makes me feel like nobody particularly liked the one above...But hey, who could blame you. I tore my emotions out as I wrote it. Made me sick. Anyway...Here's another. This was therapy, I've been away for a bit, and between the lines of this one can figure out why. Ticklish Girl.
So, sweetly innocent So intoxicating So damned invisible.
They say three times lucky, they say opposites attract, The pressure of your soul intentions made my jagged spine contract. Why'd you break my trust, dove? Why'd you laugh it off? I pleaded silently through priceless eyes, I pleaded, dove, to stop. The very tension in your breath left me feeling sick, The swirling swell of nausea still plagues my gut so thick.
I don't know what to say now, I don't even know if you care. You used to make me a better person, push away the worries, the self-consciousness, the will to throw life in the air and let it fall and walk all over me. The gifts you snuck into my arms the roses you compared me with, the way you'd lift me off my feet, the wings you'd unfold to set me on a new journey everyday. Hell, I know I never loved you, but you made me just that little bit happier.
Secrecy, venom, the supple neck of a bottle, You drank so you wouldn't remember...So you couldn't remember...Didn't you? This is the jury, place your case, Kiss these bruises, cup your hand under my face.
Tell me you care. Tell me you fúcking care. How can you not? B a s t a r d.
His hands round my waist, his breath in my hair, lips on my neck, fingertips on the curve of my pants, slipping slowly underneath, slipping like a mind into unconsciousness. So very colourful were your eyes, I remember it all. Greens, blues, browns and yellows, happies, sads, and meadows, of golden daffodils, and buttercups bright, I'm cursing you for that sickening night.
Don't make me hate you. Run with me a while? Savour this plee of emotions? Savour this...this...memory...
God I hate you, what have you done? You've stolen my wings, you've torn my insides out, you've spelt a sting in every ounce of hope I had in forgetting that past. You've brought it back, and for this I hate you, I never loved you, I can't love you, I wont love you.
Why?
Because you
Never
Love
me. It's really blurred, muddled and overall sh!t but it needed to come out, and what better place than here to burden...
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Mai/Me
Oct 20, 2005 13:25:28 GMT
Post by Faerlain on Oct 20, 2005 13:25:28 GMT
I love it.
It does remind me of a certain someone who was in my life once. I think it's something a lot of people can relate to.
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